WEEK 05. Mixed Graphs Homework
IELTS Writing Task 1
The graphs provided illustrate the yearly dollar value of online clothing and accessory sales from 2000 - 2010, and the share of clothes shopping in relation to overall spending.
Summarise the information and make comparisons where relevant.
Summarise the information and make comparisons where relevant.
Online Sales
Spending on clothes as a share of total spending
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Essay Writing
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답글삭제- 작성자: 김하람
- 제출 시간: 2월 23일 오후 02:01
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The given graph shows the yearly price value of online sales from 2000 to 2010 and the given line graph shows the percentage of spending on clothes as a share of total spending between 2000 and 2010.
In general, Online Sales was tend to increase steadily and Spending on clothes as a share of total spending was steadily decreasing.
Looking at the details, Online Sales had shown small increase between 2000 and 2005. They increased approximately 10 percent each year. Since then, they had surged between 2005 and 2007. And they maintained their proportion from 2008 to 2009, and there was big surge in 2010.
Moving to the rest parts, Spending on clothes as a share of total spending had increased between 2000 and 2001, from 14 percent
to 16 percent. After that, it steadily decreased until 2003. And they showed a slight increase in 2004. Then they had plunged approximately 2% every year.
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답글삭제- 작성자: 송재호
- 제출 시간: 2월 23일 오후 02:40
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The bar chart shows the yearly dollar value of internet clothes sales from 2000 to 2010, and the line graph illustrates percentage of spent on clothes as a share of total spending between 2000 and 2010
Overall, on the bar chart, the yearly dollar value of online shopping generally increased during given period, Meanwhile the spending on clothes as a share of overall spending showed descending trends expect few years.
Looking at the details of the online sales dollar value, in 2000, the value of online clothing and accessory sales was lowest than other years with around 25 billions, followed by the dollar value showed upward tendency to about 170 billions in 2010.
Moving to the trends of the spending on clothes as a share of total spending, the proportion of the spending was 14% in 2000, and the spending decreased to 4%, illustrating descending tendency during period, except 2001 and 2004.
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답글삭제- 작성자: 윤소연
- 제출 시간: 2월 23일 오후 02:40
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The given charts describe the dollar value of fashion items dealing on the internet for a decade(from 2000 to 2010), moreover the percentage of purchasing clothes out of total spending.
Overall, the bar is increasing gradually and the line shows descending trend over time.
Looking at the details, in 2000, online sales of clothing and jewellery was the lowest at around 25 billion dollars. the dollar value rised continuously till 2010. Eventually, it was the highest in 2010 at a slightly higher than 160 billion dollars. Meanwhile in 2008 and 2009, the change was negligible.
Regarding the second graph, the purchasing proportion of clothing starts at nearly 14%, and end up roughly 4% while it showed upward movement twice in 2001 and 2004.
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답글삭제- 작성자: 권세광
- 제출 시간: 2월 23일 오후 04:40
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These charts illustrate the dollar value of clothing bought at online and accessory sales from 2000 to 2010, the whole spending on trade of clothes.
Looking at the details, the bar of first year was hugely lower than the last bar. And the total spending graph showed he increasing tendency.
First, in the bar chart, the bar in 2000 was lowest at slightly over 20 Billions while the bar in 2010 was high and compared with both, it was about 8 times higher than the bar in 2000. Moreover, there were no bars whose differences with the bar in 2010 was lower than 20 Billions.
Moving to line graph, it indicated decreasing tendency. As, in 2001 and 2004, the line increased slightly but the amount of change in 2001 was 2% and other was about 2%. The total level of change was a tenth. The bar in 2000 was 14%, and the last one was approximately lower than twentith
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답글삭제- 작성자: 유주연
- 제출 시간: 2월 23일 오후 04:41
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The given graphs show the annual value of dollar on the part of online clothing and accessory sales from 2000 to2010, and the portion of clothes shopping related to total consumptions.
In general, over decade from 2000 to 2010, the dollar value of online sales in these parts gradually increased. In contrast to selling online, expenditures on clothes as a portion of overall spending generally decreased.
Looking at the details, in 2000, the dollar value of online sales was approximately 20 and in 2010, it increased about 8 times compared with the annual value in 2000.
Regarding the line graph, online clothes shopping was at 14% in 2000, but the figure decreased at 4% in 2010, while in 2001 and 2004 it rose slightly.
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답글삭제- 작성자: 김지후
- 제출 시간: 2월 23일 오후 05:52
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The charts illustrate the yearly value of online clothing and accessory sales form 2000 to 2010, and the share of clothes shopping in relation to overall spending.
Overall, the year that was the biggest value of online clothing and accessory sales to from 2000 to 2010 was in 2010. Moreover, Spending on clothes as a share of overall spending gradually decreased.
Looking at the details, It gradually increased. In 2000 price was the lowest. It is almost 20 billions . While, In 2010 is approximately 140 billions higher than 2000.
Regarding the spending on clothes as a share of overall spending , It started in 14% in 2000 and ended in 16% in 2010. It increased slightly in 2001 and in 2004.
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답글삭제- 작성자: 김채원
- 제출 시간: 2월 23일 오후 09:56
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The charts show money value of online clothes and accessory selling each a year over the decade between 2000 and 2010, and buying clothing of sharing of total spending.
Overall, the bar graph increases subsequently from 2000 to 2010. Moreover, the line graph decreases gradually between 2000 and 2010.
First of all, the bar chart of Online Sales started at 27% in 2000. Furthermore, the graph grew steadily for 7 years. From 2008 to 2009, the bar chart stayed similar pattern. The highest valuable Online sales was in 2010.
Moreover, the line graph of spending on clothes started at 14% in 2000. In 2001, the graph was the top of proportion. But, the graph
================ 작성 답안 ================
답글삭제This given bar graph illustrates the annual amount of online shopping categories from 2000 to 2010, and the given line graph shows share of clothes shopping in relation to overall spending.
In general, people preferring to purchase fashion items in online platforms are clearly increased every year from 2000 to 2010. And the proportion of buying clothes slightly increased from 2000 to 2001, whereas dramatically decreased at around 15% from 2001 to 2010.
Firstly, the value of online sales obviously recorded the lowest in 2000, while the value of mobile shopping about fashion categories showed steadily growing over the years, and finally, in 2010, it recorded slightly 160 billions which was the largest amount of sales ever.
However, the percentage of spending on clothes as a share of total spending had hit the bottom in 2010.When it slightly increased at 2% from 2000 to 2001, and around at 1% inclined from 2003 to 2004.
Finally, the two graphs display contrasting situations, highlighting opposing trends over the same period.
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답글삭제- 작성자: 한규민
- 제출 시간: 2월 23일 오후 11:18
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The given charts gave information about the yearly dollar value of online fashion items from 2000 to 2010 the share of clothes shopping in relation to overall pay
In general, online sales showed consistent increase, and spending on clothes as a share of total spending experienced opposite occasion
Regarding to online sales, in 2000, it recorded approximately 20 sales, and, in 2007, more than 120 sales. However, there was not important change between 2008 to 2009. it stayed between 120 sales to 140. Subsequently, in 2010, it surged at nearly 160 sales.
Moving to the spending on clothes as a share of total pay, in 2000, it indicated 14%, and surged to 16% in 2001. And it showed decreasing until 2003 at approximately a tenth, followed by gradual decrease. So, in 2010, it recorded 4%.
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답글삭제- 작성자: 이나경
- 제출 시간: 2월 23일 오후 11:39
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These charts illustrate the yearly dollar value online clothing and jewelry sales and the share of fashion shopping in relation to overall spending from 2000 to 2010.
Overall, the dollar value in online sales of clothing and jewelry was constantly increasing from 2000 to 2010 while spending on cloths as a share of total spending was decreasing in contemporary.
Looking at the detail, in 2000, the bar chart which contain the dollar value in online sales of clothing and jewelry was 27.3 billions. However, the chart was gradually surge from 2000 to 2010, and finally the dollar value was over than 150 billions in 2010.
Moving to the line chart, the percentage of spending on clothes as a share was 15% in 2000, even the dollar value was reach the worst in same year. The similar phenomenon happened in 2010. The value of online sales of fashion was 150 billions in 2010, as a highest cost. In contrast, the percentage of spending on clothes as a share was the lowest at under 5% in 2010.
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답글삭제- 작성자: 노상윤
- 제출 시간: 2월 24일 오전 12:30
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The graphs given show the yearly dollar value of online clothing and accessory sales from 2000 to 2010, and the share of clothes shopping in relation to overall spending.
Overall, online sales generally increased from 2000 to 2010, while spending on clothes as a share of total spending declined over the same period.
Looking for the details of the online sales proposition at over 20 billion dollars in 2000, whereas in 2010, it increased significantly, to almost 170 billion dollars.
Regarding the spending on clothes as a share of total spending generally decreased the yearly value in online sales. In 2000, the proportion at 14%, whereas it increased to 16% in 2001. In 2003, the proportion decreased by almost 10%, whereas it was rising slightly to 11% in 2004, and then generally decreased. Finally, in 2010, the proportion was at 4%.
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답글삭제- 작성자: 유우진
- 제출 시간: 2월 24일 오후 09:37
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The given bar chart illustrates the yearly dollar value of online shopping sales, and the bar chart shows the percentage of overall spending on clothes. Both chart illustrates between 2000 and 2010.
Overall, the money of people using online shopping was gradually increased. At the same time, the proportion of spending money on clothes in the daily budget was continuously decreased.
Looking at the details, in 2000, the money was the least at 27 bilions. And it was steadily increased by over 10 billions yearly from 2001 to 2007. During 6 year, the total money was growen from 33 to 126 bilions. After that, it rised yearly slightly between 2007 and 2009. In 2010, it increased the greatest- 30 bilions for a year.
Regarding to the line graph, in 2000, the spending clothes percentage in the total spending budget was allocated with 14%. It slightly increased by 2% at 16% in 2001, and between 2003 and 2004, it had similar pattern, it increased by under 1% at 11%. Meanwhile, it decreased the greatest from 2001 to 2003, it almost declied by 5% at 11%. Between 2004 and 2010, the percentage was gradually decreased. Therefore, the proportion in 2010 was slightly less than a half in 2000.
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답글삭제- 작성자: 임정환
- 제출 시간: 2월 26일 오후 07:37
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The bar graph shows the crucial of dollar in online clothing and accessory sales , and the line illustrates the percentage of clothes shopping in relation to total spending for ten years from 2000 to 2010.
Overall, the figure of online sales showed an upward trend. Intrestingly, the percentage of total spending on clothes showed the opposite trend during the given period.
Looking at the details, in 2000, the propotion of online sales were almost 30 billions, and continuous increased to 2010 with more than 160 billions dollars.
Moving to the percentage of total spending on clothes, in 2000, the figure started 14% and experienced peaking to exactly 16% while by the end of 2001, it decreased to aproximately 11% in the beginning of 2003. Moreover, spending on clothes steadily showed a downward trend to 4% throughout a decades.